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Post by Grits on Mar 28, 2006 13:45:32 GMT -5
My response to my friend's poem.....
If Only Within A Dream: The Next Night
.....if only ever within a dream I will be the night to your day I will be the sun to your moon On that windy, starry night... I will be the one holding you. If only in dreams I will go where you want me to go I will long for you I want to kiss you yet not kiss you because in you you are worth the anticipation Two bloodlines become one as does two hearts become one as does two souls become one In my dreams my hands gently massage away your stress my fingertips accentuate what you know you are craving from me my eyes gaze fixated on you my heart races because we are now... we in my dreams the separate roads taken to finally walk down life's pathway have now become one In my dreams at this moment as your lips touch mine so begins my life Now what a feeling to look amongst the stars wind embracing us in its power and know that I am yours
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Lady
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Post by Lady on Mar 29, 2006 12:16:48 GMT -5
My God, I think I need to have a dream like this. Where my love and I intertwine in winds. This and the last poem were both real cool. Bring more to the page because now I need to read more.
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