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Post by Fela on Nov 4, 2005 9:46:11 GMT -5
The weight on my heart
Is the same crush as the water when I’ve swum too deep,
And I’m certain I’ll never reach the light again.
But I rise, gasping for air.
But now I cannot find the air.
It feels like part of me is crystallizing.
Turning cold, turning to stone.
I feel my pulse in my fingertips,
Feel the ache on my skin
As my sadness sinks in.
To love you is to stop breathing.
I’d stop the hand of time to keep you from leaving,
To keep your gaze upon me.
Hold my breath in anticipation
Of the day when…
Your kiss could be mine.
But I’ve stopped breathing.
And I’ve gone blind.
Sadness stole the light
And I’m in darkness all this time.
I forget what colors look like,
You’re seared into my brain
In silhouette, just black and grays.
These sad days.
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Post by Justin on Nov 6, 2005 19:06:13 GMT -5
I'm saddened because there are "just black and grays." I felt that.  |
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Post by speaker4dozens on Nov 13, 2005 20:43:28 GMT -5
Kudos Justin! Im feeling this also. A bit too much I'm afraid, but "this too shall pass" and there will be no black and gray. The colors will come and stay. Darkness will not reign and we will succumb to a better light not pain. Be Easy. God Bless!
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Post by deepthought74 on Nov 14, 2005 17:32:23 GMT -5
U have done it again!! Im really feeling this!! But u already know that dont you lol....keep writing
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Divine Justice
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Post by Divine Justice on Nov 15, 2005 8:25:29 GMT -5
No colors in Love. I feel this more then I care to say.
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Post by Fela on Nov 30, 2005 12:08:01 GMT -5
I am so deeply moved by all of your comments ~
I am as always , very humbled ~
Thank you and be gentle with yourselves
Yours , Fela
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