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Post by Fela on Dec 16, 2005 7:57:58 GMT -5
Soft Seduction, in your voice, at your fingertips. You like to trace my lips, then leave them unkissed. You like the way I obey. Let you bind my wrists... like this.
You put one hand in my hair, pull my face aside. With a cruel intent, you pay torturous attention to my skin, leaving me bruised a glorious shade of crimson.
You like the way I writhe beneath you, the way I resist you doing the things you do. You crave the sounds I make and do whatever it takes to make me fight you.
You like the way I breathe when you're inside of me. You like the way I hold your head until you've satified me. You like the way I move against what you do and the way I sound when I come.
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Post by deepthought74 on Dec 16, 2005 12:42:38 GMT -5
This was seductive!! Loving this!!
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Post by Fela on Dec 16, 2005 14:12:08 GMT -5
May I be bold for a moment ? what did you like ..if you can say ... and if you have read my other work... may I ask if you think I have a piece that is strong ? I value your opinion, and admire your talent ... and well...I am selecting stuff to submit ... so if you have any input I would so very much appreciate it . many thanks ~ Fela
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Post by deepthought74 on Dec 16, 2005 17:54:25 GMT -5
May I be bold for a moment ? what did you like ..if you can say ... and if you have read my other work... may I ask if you think I have a piece that is strong ? I value your opinion, and admire your talent ... and well...I am selecting stuff to submit ... so if you have any input I would so very much appreciate it . many thanks ~ Fela You put one hand in my hair, pull my face aside. With a cruel intent, you pay torturous attention to my skin, leaving me bruised a glorious shade of crimson. This verse here I love...expecially the part u pay torturous attention to my skin...that sticks out to me along with glorous shade of crimson....excellent visuals!! I will get back with u on the pieces I like...there are several...u have skills and Im being sincere when I say that! but I will get back with u on that....its nice to know my opinion means something to u ...im about to cry lol...for real though...thanks for the love....and I will get back with u soon on my favorite pieces...one
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